Comma
splices and run-on sentences have one thing in common: they need stronger punctuation.
Three quick ways to fix either—comma splice or run on—depend on the above
mentioned stronger punctuation.
The
following diagrams may help you to remember three basic options you have:
1. Use a
semicolon between the two sentences, especially when the ideas are closely
related:
Sentence; sentence.
2. Use a
comma and conjunction between the two sentences—both, not just the comma:
Sentence, and (but, nor, for, etc.) sentence.
3. End one
sentence with a punctuation mark, usually a period (not always—what if you are
asking a question?) and begin the next sentence with a capital letter.
Sentence. Capital letter of first word of new
sentence.
Definite
punctuation between sentences provides clarity for the reader. A lack of
punctuation can and does lead to confusion. One way to keep in mind that the
right punctuation is in place between sentences is visual. All three of the
above solutions actually look larger than a tiny comma or no punctuation at all
between sentences.
You might
also think of it as the difference between hoping your boat left untied at the
dock will not float away (run on, or no punctuation); tying your boat to the dock with a slight
piece of string (comma splice); or using
a solid rope to keep the boat in place (correct punctuation). Your chances of
finding your boat when you go back to it are better with the stronger
connections to the dock. Your odds of giving your readers a clear idea of what
you say are much, much better with good punctuation.
See you next
time the breeze is cool, the sun is up, and the waves roll into view! ‘Til
then, hang ten!
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